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July 02, 2007

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Elizabeth

Wow! What a boy, what a family, what a story!

It was so interesting to start it by referring to the same place at different times!

I love the way you paint such vivid pictures of your life, your family!

elizabeth cobblah

Denise I'm in awe of how your writing voice sounds so much like your speaking voice.....anyway.... thanks for sharing the story of Phillipe and helping us all get intent vs impact. Have a great time at camp...what a life, eh? and what a break for you!!!

Janet

Beautiful!
What a great variety of experiences you've given him and your whole family already!
Have a great time at camp!

Larane

I'm so grateful for the laughs you fit into your really painful stories. It's a remarkable gift.

Sue

Whew! Your writing seems to always fire me up--THANK YOU. And, Fitz, your "lucky" comments are so right on... We are two moms with two adopted bi-racial girls. Your "lucky" piece made me think of the looks on those I-guess-well-meaning-what-country-did-you-adopt-from faces when we respond, "Pennsylvania."

mimi

Denise - I really enjoyed the "time lapse" format of this piece -- the chance to be in the same place (physically) for an annual visit can help us appreciate how much distance we cover in daily living -- personal growth and depth of experience can be hard to see without that chance to step back. It's kind of like how you don't see your own kids growing taller day after day, but the nieces and nephews you see less often sure seem to change fast! Congratulations to you, Pipo, and the whole family -- you are all lucky to have each other!

Rich

Nice read. You always write so well and tell a great story. great to hear how much fun the camp is. keep up the great posts

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